Jorge San Martin
1. I think some more detail could be added to show the extremes of everything. Like the rich to poor and even the temperatures in MN to in Honduras.
2. I think your sources are very true and flow into your feature story very well. They make sense, and you have a variety of peoples opinions.
3. I feel like your sense of what you're doing is very strong and you stand behind your subject.
4. I believe that you could maybe end a little stronger. Give some examples of maybe what you could have gone through in Honduras and what you are doing now. I really liked your detail and difference of schooling between the trilingual and only English schooling.
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